Issues from 1st Screening

Issues with the 1st screening

After our first screening there were a few issues we would need to fix during our next shoot and editing sessions. The first issue was that we had not established our narrative well enough and it wasn't clear enough on what the film is about.

The second issue was that we had still not added any titles meaning our peers had no idea on who is in the film, who directed it or any of the company's that helped produce it.

Another issue was that our investigation scene didn't have anyone in it and the setting takes place in doesn't look much like an office so we are going to need to re shoot that.