In today's lesson we were given some feedback on our title sequence so far. We gained some positive feedback for things such as the cinematography, soundtrack and props used. The things we were told we could improve on was to maybe get rid of some of the scenes as they didn't quite fit. For example the investigation scene we planned to use could be taken out or if we want to keep it then there needs to be a clearer transition from the two settings. We were also told that we need to have maybe 1 or 2 more setting in our title sequence.
Cinematography -
Canted angle shot
Low angle shot to show the killer as a more powerful being
Hand Held Footage
Sound -
Add foley sound like scratching or footsteps for example
Editing -
No gaps
Credits
Correct font
Clear narrative structure
Mise en Scene -
Possibly add a new location
More props
investigation scene needs work e.g. wrong setting.
new character
Canted angle shot
Low angle shot to show the killer as a more powerful being
Hand Held Footage
Sound -
Add foley sound like scratching or footsteps for example
Editing -
No gaps
Credits
Correct font
Clear narrative structure
Mise en Scene -
Possibly add a new location
More props
investigation scene needs work e.g. wrong setting.
new character
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